Rather than post all the dialog files individually, let's try for the jackpot! I've compressed the entire directory - see if you can load and decompress this. Most of the changes are minor, either spelling or punctuation - there are probably still some errors I've missed but that should be most of them. Factual errors have also been corrected, e.g. Quelp originally said he was to escort you to Isla Mona, and while Quelp is supposed to be devious, I don't think that's supposed to be part of his naughtiness, so now he says he's to escort you to Cayman, which is what he does. And during the "Duchess and the Devil" part, someone mentions Port Royale, which I've corrected - in fact I used the label "#sRedmond#" so that it should be correct even if the town gets renamed again.