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<!--quoteo(post=271400:date=Jul 31 2008, 06:04 PM:name=Mercer)--><div class='quotetop'>QUOTE (Mercer @ Jul 31 2008, 06:04 PM) <a href="index.php?act=findpost&pid=271400"><{POST_SNAPBACK}></a></div><div class='quotemain'><!--quotec-->Well, I forgot about the french port idea. I know the Batavia is still in, (hopefully). I have had my hands tied lately, I have been running around doing this and that. So, we do have a collection of ideas we need to sift through and try to combine them in the best possible way. Here is a rough outline I think we were about to agree on:
-Wench pulls up at the coast.
-Failed George Washington Moment.
-In the jungle, Jack gets scared.
-Arrival at villiage. Children playing on and near water wheel, foreshadow to DMC.
-Jack goes to the Shaman (Dalma).
-Children dance around Mercer, the monster throwing flowers at his feet.
-Jack and Dalma hear screaming.
-Mercer busts into the hut saying she will be coming along.
-Jack askes Mercer what's going on.
-Mercer says they are the cargo.
-Villiage burns, and the populace is brought off in chains, Mercer has a slight smirk on his face, watching the children be taken.
And thats what I see so far, before we had the new ideas. <img src="style_emoticons/<#EMO_DIR#>/biggrin.gif" style="vertical-align:middle" emoid="" border="0" alt="biggrin.gif" /><!--QuoteEnd--></div><!--QuoteEEnd-->
So whats wrong with it?
Jack and Tia are talking.
The army won't start with enslaving right away, it will start in couple of minutes. Just the time we need to Jack and Tia have a small conversation.
-Wench pulls up at the coast.
-Failed George Washington Moment.
-In the jungle, Jack gets scared.
-Arrival at villiage. Children playing on and near water wheel, foreshadow to DMC.
-Jack goes to the Shaman (Dalma).
-Children dance around Mercer, the monster throwing flowers at his feet.
-Jack and Dalma hear screaming.
-Mercer busts into the hut saying she will be coming along.
-Jack askes Mercer what's going on.
-Mercer says they are the cargo.
-Villiage burns, and the populace is brought off in chains, Mercer has a slight smirk on his face, watching the children be taken.
And thats what I see so far, before we had the new ideas. <img src="style_emoticons/<#EMO_DIR#>/biggrin.gif" style="vertical-align:middle" emoid="" border="0" alt="biggrin.gif" /><!--QuoteEnd--></div><!--QuoteEEnd-->
So whats wrong with it?
Jack and Tia are talking.
The army won't start with enslaving right away, it will start in couple of minutes. Just the time we need to Jack and Tia have a small conversation.